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Key ingredients in an admissions essay

November 2019

Every college applicant’s story is unique. Following a specific recipe in your essays can make them come across as inauthentic and trite. However, there are common ingredients in strong essays:

  • Gratitude: Acknowledge the teachers, mentors, and/or family members that have helped you along the way.
  • Authenticity: Write in your own voice using vocabulary that you actually use.
  • Resilience: Frame your struggles and setbacks as opportunities for growth.
  • Hope: Show your hopes for the future.
  • Sensory details: Use concrete, descriptive details to enliven your essay.
  • Structure: Organize your essay as a logical progression of ideas.
  • Flow: Read your essay aloud to get a sense of how the words flow together.